Production - Textual Analysis of my Documentary

Production - Textual Analysis of my TV Listings Review

Production - Textual Analysis of my Newspaper Advert

Research - Audience Feedback 2

After making the improvements from I had received on my first audience feedback questionnaire, I sent out another questionnaire with my updated products and some similar to questions that will help me to make sure my products look good and appeal to my target audience, but will also help me to see what I need to improve.
I received less improvements than I had gotten last time, which shows that my documentary was better than it was the first time I had sent it.
Most of the comments targeted the same specific area, such as the noise level on one of the interviews. This was extremely helpful because I was able to focus on specific details that would make my documentary look more aesthetically pleasing and appeal to my target audience.

Production - Interviews

I got another interview with a Sociologist undergraduate as my audience feedback stated that I should get another interview in order to give another perspective on the topic. I cropped the interview so that the subject is in the right of the frame (rule of thirds) as this looks more aesthetically pleasing and also follows documentary interview codes and conventions. I will place these interviews side by side my other interview in order to see how their views compare.

Production - Presenter Shots

Soem fo the feedback I received from my audience feedback said that some of the presenter shots were quite 'grainy' and not very bright, which I agreed with. I re-filmed the shots with a brighter light and a higher quality in order to make the shots looks more professional and aesthetically pleasing.

Production - Documentary Opening Sequence

The audience feedback stated that I should remove the 'Tuesday 9pm' section of my ad when using it as the title page in my documentary. I have removed this because I think that it will look more aesthetically pleasing this way and adhere to conventions of documentary titles that do not tend to have the date in their opening sequence. I also removed the website as again this did not adhere to conventions and looked more aesthetically pleasing without the website link.

Production - Titles and fonts

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I changed the font of my titles to Helvetica Neue as I felt this font fitted my brand better. I also put some of the facts and words from the question in red. As colour scheme throughout my newspaper advert and my TV listings review is red and white I thought that including red in some of the titles would help to continue a house style and brand identity. The colour scheme helps to show the connection between the documentary and the ancillary products.

Production - Pull focus

When originally adding in my facts and statistics over what I was saying, I wanted to blur out the presenter in the background in order to ensure that the audience's focus is on the statistic and also follow documentary codes and conventions. I managed to do this by dragging the pull focus from the 'titles' section on iMovie over my text and this helped to blur out the background a little bit.

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Production - Editing Titles

I originally did not include the name of the interviewee over the footage of the interview. However, I think including the name and their occupation will give context to the audience and may also help the audience relate to the interviewee (Blumer and Katz Uses and Gratifications theory - relationship).
I have used the same font that I have used throughout the rest of my documentary in order to ensure continuity in the documentary. However, I will get some feedback from my focus group and audience to see if the subtitle is suitable.

Production - Editing Sound

One of the improvements that I received on my audience feedback results was that I should make the music from the opening sequence and the music behind the interviews fade out rather than just stop abruptly because that did not sound good or follow documentary codes and conventions. At first I was unsure of how to make the music fade out but I managed to pull out the little dots at the end of the audio, which allowed the music to gradually fade out. I was able to adjust this to how I wanted and I will get more feedback from my focus group to see if the fade out sounds appropriate.

Production - TV Listings Improvements

After reading through my audience feedback I made some changes to my TV listings review. I changed the pull quote to red as this was some of the feedback I received. The feedback also said to change the font of my review so I changed the font to Adobe Garamond Pro as I felt this font looked more professional. In addition to this, I also added in the masthead from 'RadioTimes' magazine alongside the page numbers in order to show that this review is from a TV listings magazine. This is a common convention that is seen in magazines.