Production - Editing Newspaper Advert

The image I chose to use was the final shot that I took when creating my moving picture introduction for my documentary. By using this image I hope to develop a house style and continuity.
I edited the image on Photos, adjusting the contrast and saturation.
Here is what the advert looks like after I added in my title, logo and tagline. I made sure that the tagline was a question because this was a common convention I saw on other channel 4 ads. Additionally, it will also hopefully act as an engima and encourage the audience to watch my documentary. I will send this copy to my focus group so that I can get some feedback on what to improve.